tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8841672924754248483.post2901277211323267315..comments2023-05-24T07:08:40.520-07:00Comments on නොතිව් තිත: යෞවන අහසSusanthahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14908507336210790047noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8841672924754248483.post-27741151532114268672010-10-18T05:25:33.424-07:002010-10-18T05:25:33.424-07:00ස්තුතී ප්රතිචාර වලට @ සුජීව මම මුලින්ම ලිව්වෙ සොද...ස්තුතී ප්රතිචාර වලට @ සුජීව මම මුලින්ම ලිව්වෙ සොදුරු යෞවන අහස කියල, පස්සෙ තුරුනු යෞවන අහස කියල වෙනස් කර රිද්මය හොදයි කියල හිතලාSusanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14908507336210790047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8841672924754248483.post-78112409986715360822010-10-13T06:14:22.118-07:002010-10-13T06:14:22.118-07:00superb.
susantha I have got into the habbit of c...superb. <br /><br />susantha I have got into the habbit of commenting to poems. so pls dont blame me. word "thurunu" is teh most powerful word of poem, and some other word cud have taken for a very good purpose as "thurunu" is repeated anyway by next word.<br /><br />However a minute issue. Poem is pretty good.<br /><br />Sorry if it is not OK to comment, pls feel free to comment on my poems too.Sujeewa Kokawalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02963694008974806937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8841672924754248483.post-15154844964328272992010-10-13T01:19:49.065-07:002010-10-13T01:19:49.065-07:00සුසන්ත මූණමල්පෙ ලස්සන සිතුවමක් සමගින් ආයෙම ඇවිත් ක...සුසන්ත මූණමල්පෙ ලස්සන සිතුවමක් සමගින් ආයෙම ඇවිත් කවියක් අරන්...DawsonPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09490896121173115657noreply@blogger.com